3rd tutoring session

         I had two tutees and even though I didn't want two, this time around it wasn't bad, the two tutees I had were cool, their assignment were to Write a 1200-1500 word research essay arguing that a work of popular culture (short story, novel, comic book, advertisement, T.V. show, movie, or song) either discriminates against a particular group of people, or that it works to raise awareness about a specific type of discrimination. Both tutees told me they had already did a paper earlier in class and for this paper they could go back and take information from it. Both tutees had their paper, I read the first tutee paper and his paper was great, every time he brought up a main idea, he had information to back it up, he had just enough details, the only thing for his paper I had to correct was the way he wrote his sentences. The second tutee paper was ok, as I read her paper, I see she kept writing the same thing over and over. every paragraph had the same information, all she did was change words and she had a lot of mistakes. I told her to stick with one main idea and talk about it. she wrote everything down that I told her to change. Both tutees told me that I helped them and they would make the corrections on heir papers.